When I decided to write the story of cancer patients it was
not a new decision. I was contemplating of writing about the fatal disease from
a very long time. In fact more than 3650 days!
On one hand, I wanted to write. On the other hand, I was not
ready to give any solution for the problem because I am not qualified to give!
So, I decided to take a via media path. Why not bring out
awareness and if possible, a few preventive measures too?
I have seen people who have literally ‘dumped’ their parents
in front of an old age home. Actually it is good in a way. The children are
good. They could have left somewhere at the end of the world where they won’t
be taken care.
I have seen parents, heard about parents, who went out of
their children’s lives/houses, since they had contacted the never curable
disease.
With this background I decided to write. I wanted the blog
to be small and readable in a very few minutes. The other idea was to keep an
element of suspense every day so that the readers should at least feel like
continuing the next day.
I am not sure how much I have been successful. But at least
two of my readers have said that it is gripping and melancholic. A rare
combination! I had read my favorite Author Mr. Yandamoori Veerendranath’s racy
novel about a girl who has cancer – Prarthana. Ever since then I was wondering
whether I would be able to write about cancer and still create an element of
suspense throughout the novel.
There were other points raised by one of my readers. I
usually keep attractive names for the characters. In this book, there are only
names throughout the book. Nammu and Dammu. All other characters have their
names as their professions. I wanted to be the narrator, but I felt a young man
would fit the bill. Hence the first person narration.
I have to be pardoned because this is a novel I wrote after
10 long years!
since you were writing in first person, I thought it is a real story and read till the end. I had to finish my work and tomorrow is going to be a bad day in office.
ReplyDeleteIt was unbelievable to see so many people die on the same day! There were twists to twist.
I do have 3 feedbacks:
> Completion of events is necessary. Like when dammu's alleged bf was killed. There must have been police or something. Dammu must have been in some shock. It was pretty rushed.
> It is nice that you avoided giving names but at times it was funny to read. Dammu's husband's first wife's grandparents.
>More time on editing maybe. Because when you are in a flow you just keep writing but all may not be needed to the story.
But nice storyline. Had hard time gulping the decisions of dammu at times. Bold character. It's nice!